Thursday, January 17, 2013

How has every one been i have been very busy so i didn't write any thing but here is something.



            The Race
             Chapter 1
It was a beautiful day in the city and everywhere you went people were everywhere. In a little store a boy was bustling about sorting stuff and doing stuff for the owner. The owner tossed him a shilling and thanked him. The boy ran into the busy streets and headed towards another store. He ran inside and gave a note to the owner. The owner walked off to the back door and returned with a box of all type of candy’s and stuff. The man gave him pence and went back to his own work. The boy ran down the street with the stuff to a local toy and candy shop. The boy ran in and came back out with five pence and a bag of candy. He then stuffed the things in his messenger bag and headed towards another place. He ran into an ally right beside the biggest store in town and then ran to a dumpster. He wanted to see if there was anything in it before the dump truck came. He jumped in the giant dumpster and came out with all type of stuff ice cream still cold but expired today and open toys with missing pieces. He grabbed these with a delight got out of the trash can and stuffed the things in his bag. What a load he said plenty to sell on eBay for I have no time to play with them so ill almost have enough to buy that bike to make my errands easier. All of the owners of shops knew him as the errand boy for he did them all day to pay for the shack and a maid which watched over his sick mother for you see two years ago she got very ill and she had to quit working. The boys errands maid a lot of money and he was saving them up to buy a better house and later some new clothing. It was now four pm and the boy had already made a hundred dollars and he was walking to his next errand when five mean boys came out of an ally and grabbed his stuff. OH what’s this ice cream the leader said? The started to kick the boy the boy tried to control his anger but he could no longer he punched the leader graded his stuff and kicked another then headed towards his job. The small group started chasing him until out of another ally came some more of the same group. They had him surrounded and there were like thirty of them. The leader all of a sudden said charge. Then out of a giant tree house from a rich house came fifteen boys about his age. They ran towards the little group and managed to see the boy defending himself. Maybe we should let him join the leader said. Yes said another leader but he’s not rich. Oh he is in savings that’s the errand boy. They jumped into the fight. The bad group scattered and that left the rest of them alone. Thank you said the boy tossing them a shilling. Where do you think you’re going said the leader grabbing him on the shoulder? Well I have another errand to do then I must get home to my mother and I am doing some surveys on the computer to get some money then I am doing my own thing. Well how much did you earn today. Umm why do you want to know? Oh just out of curiosity. Well he said whispering into the leader’s ear I made two hundred and fifty pence so far and ten shillings. Oh not bad why don’t you join us tonight in our tree house well maybe once I’m done with my errands. That’s a good chap then run along. The boy whose name was Mark ran off to another errand.

Monday, December 10, 2012

chapter 3 of the battle of fort bellow



              The showdown
They woke up again to the sound of shooting.
 They looked outside to see mike on the ground and bill 
Riding away. Get him they both shot at bill. Ah he got
 away yeah well let’s check on mike alright. They ran  
Over toWhere mike was they got him to his wife. Well
 mike were going to go in town to see the doctor want to
  Come a long. Na you guys go ahead. Alright it was a mile
 journey to town they reached it at noon. They got Off their
 horses they walk in the saloon. Bill ran right into them tom
 jumped under a table Joe pulled out 
His pistols and tom pulled out his rifle. Bill jumped out side
 to safety knocking Joe over. They got up then 
Ran outside. They ran outside and took cover behind some
 barrels. Bill ran in a stable. He shot at Joe
Hitting his hat off. He threw some dynamite at Joe a guy jump
 out of the saloon grabbed it and cut the
Fuss off. The stranger asked. You guys need any help because
 I don’t really like that fellow and I have
Nothing to do and to really go. Alright come on lets grab some
 horses they ran for the stable. They pick
Out horses then they started to ride. They rode fast along the
 road going to sandy. They caught up with
Bill. He was going under a tree when Larry shot at the branch it
 knocked bill out of his horse. He ran for
The mountain tops. They followed him they started firing bill ran
 out of ammo. Ok let’s go up now Joe
Said sticking his head out of there protection a rock came flying
and hit him ouch. Bill jump from his
Hiding spot and jump on a pass buyer he knocked him off his horse
 and then rode to the next town. Joe
Tom and Larry got their horses then picked up the pass buyer and
 headed the way bill had run away by.
They got to town bill ran passed a guy took his guns then ran in a building.
 They dropped off the pass
Buyer then ran for the building. They made it to it without a hole then ran inside.
 Bill jumped out the
Window and ran for the saloon. He came out with two pals bob and slim.
 Larry shot a pot which fell on
Slim. He got back up then pulled out his rifle and started shooting back.
Larry shot bob in the head slim
Ran off. Bill was a hard to get person. Then slim came back with Jerry
 Koda and Jim. They rode in and
Started fighting again. Meanwhile mike was feeling uncomfortable so
 he got two men and headed out for
Town. He came to the first town and asked if someone knew anything a guy
 said they went that way.
Mike saw what was happening now he galloped to go to sandy. He got there
 and him and his men
Opened fire on their backs they got slim Jim and Jerry. Koda turned around
 shot one of mikes men but
Got shot down.
 They had bill surrounded they took him back to prison and took mikes soldier
 to the hospital and
Tom. Larry got his stuff at the saloon then went to the fort with them they
 ate supper then went to bed.
here is Chapter 2 to the battle of fort bellow



           The great find
Tom and Joe woke up got ready for that day. They ate
 breakfast then headed to the storage room once
More they went to where they had found the bow and
arrows. Joe leaned on the barrel the bow was
 Leaning on. It tip over they gasped. Under the barrel there
 was a hole. Some people ran out the door
They had arrived yesterday. What were they doing in there?
 They put the barrel back and ate lunch.
Went for a swim ate supper then went to bed. They woke up
 to here a gunshot they grabbed a gun then
Ran out the door. The strangers ran for the hole. Tom shot. 
  Someone shot toms left arm. Mike ran out
And the battle was over in a jiffy. Mike got tom to the hospital.
 Then they went back t

Tuesday, November 27, 2012

Monday, November 26, 2012

sorry about the long wait i just couldn't come up with any thing but here's a story
 

                                                     part 1 of the crisis in town
It was the middle of may a covered wagon was stuck in the mud five body's were on the ground dead.  They had made a good fight but they did not make it. There was a red stained wagon. The sheriff and his posy was over looking the case. It was probably a big harry monsters one said. No said the sheriff it was probably a big ugly giant with a war club. No said a gentle man that had just road up. It was the black eagles. Who are the black eagles the sheriff and his posy asked mystified and who are you. Oh i forgot to introduce my self. My name is detective James Smit. Oh and the black eagles are a band of robbers with the courage of a lion. They will fight the toughest men and they will always win that is what they think but i have put together a group of detectives that has sworn that they will stay and help there fellow detectives. Men Smit said let me introduce you to my highly trained group called the men of Colorado.


well thats all for right now and i hope every one has a good day.

Monday, September 10, 2012



new short hope you like it 
Chapter One
                                                                                                                                                                                                 The Arrows
In the mist of the morning there were two men on horses heading to fort bellow. They came to the big
Wooden gate maybe ten years old. Bill a thin man with black hair and brown eyes was the gate keeper.
He opened the gate and they went in. mike a big red haired man with green eyes came up to the
Visitors. Hi make yourself at home he said go to cabin seven after they were unpacked they went
Outside. Out of nowhere an arrow came flying through the sky. They found a note on it. The note said
That if you stay
Long you will die. It was time to eat so they headed to mikes when they got there they had beef with
Gravy. Then they showed mike the letter. What could it mean? I don’t know but it means that someone
In the fort is shooting the arrows so watch out. On the way back to the cabin another arrow came flying
Out of nowhere and it took tom a slender fellow with brown hairs hat off. What are we going to do said
Joe a bulky man with black hair? Well I’m going to give this to mike he ran off but was back in a second.
What did it say asked Joe? It said leave are die. Well let’s get in the cabin because I don’t want an arrow
Hitting me in the dark. They went inside and changed then went to bed. At the first sign of daybreak
They were up Joe and tom got dressed. They each had revolvers on each side of them. They strapped  
Shotguns on their backs. Then they went to eat with mike and his wife Mary. After they were done they
Went outside to look at the spring that went right through the fort. They were looking at it there was
Something in the water they pulled it out it had a note on it too. It said last warning leave are be killed.
They gave to mike. Oh my we need to be more careful. When they were walking to cabin seven they saw
A blur. When they got in the cabin tom looked at Joe this isn’t good. What isn’t? Bill has been following
Us around. So they left the topic alone for a while tom was polishing a gun and Joe was reading. When
Mike came in time for lunch you slow pokes. They had lunch. Hey mike can we go in and look at the
Storage room. Sure you’ll have to get bill to take you I’m helping my wife with something. Alright they
Got bill to come. The door squeaked a lot when it opened. They had almost looked over the whole thing
When bill said I’ll be right back. When he left they went to look at the last corner. In it they saw a bow
And arrow and some paper with notes on them they started to dig through them when bill said put your
Hands up are you’ll be dead.so they did that now move away from that stuff. Suddenly the door opened
And mike walked in bill looked round. This was their only chance they dove at him they had him out
Numbered and had him in prison in half a jiffy.  Then they went to bed.